update Make it yourself v2

5 Responses to “update Make it yourself v2”

1. 1 by Jebs | Oct 6th, 2007 at 11:22 am

   hi azzaoui! i like it, i think you are going in the right direction,
   but here, i prefer the variations when you create the side underneath “darker” that the side on the foreground (the variations with two blue etc…) why didn’t you apply it in the main preview logo in greyscale? (just 1 color here)

   anyway, i like a lot your situations, the Tee shirt shape for example is pretty good…just continue!!!!

2. 2 by azzaoui | Oct 6th, 2007 at 11:38 am

   thank you jebs your feedback is helpfull i wanted to make it contrast with the gradient beside the logo - i like the teeshirt too in fact it can works alone with a nice typo gonna try this if i have time this week or next week

   good luck for this week.

3. 3 by Jebs | Oct 6th, 2007 at 11:48 am

   yes azzaoui, try also a version with the tee shirt
   about the gradient, i don’t think it’s necessary, or it should be IMO brighter, not so contrasted, to give full impact at the logo, like all most of the previews you saw in the contest (for example mine ) i like especially your version on black gradient, with the spreadshirt in grey (we don’t see so much the outlines there, and i would go in that direction )

   thanks for the good luck ^^

4. 4 by Lufograf | Oct 6th, 2007 at 2:46 pm

   Hi azzaoui !
   Nice job with your typeface ! But I think that it’s better with the tagline in a classical typo. Your logo is already a little bit complicate so don’t charge it too much !

5. 5 by azzaoui | Oct 6th, 2007 at 3:47 pm

   thanks lufograf your point of view is interesting. need some more feedback with it

   in fact the idea was to create a original tagline that’s why i create this one. i think it’s interesting that way but keep your advice in mind if needed.

   Thank you all for your comments !! It’s always nice to have feedback on your work

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