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41 Responses to “play with the forms”


  1. 1 by JDELPHIN | Oct 5th, 2007 at 2:18 pm

    wow I really like this concept. I draws a lot of ideas and can be easily adaptable. Really fresh concept.
    Just a point that cames to my mind: Maybe small icons in the shirt are too small for the main logo that certainly won’t be so big.

  2. 2 by netweight | Oct 5th, 2007 at 2:20 pm

    Yeah, Unilever rocks! ;) I like it. Not sure about the guns though …

  3. 3 by Jebs | Oct 5th, 2007 at 2:26 pm

    yeah, the concept is nice, but leave the guns, netweight is pretty right ;-)

  4. 4 by Leah | Oct 5th, 2007 at 2:35 pm

    yes, indeed the gun looks a bit out of place amidst the other pleasant, happier icons :-)

  5. 5 by Japasa | Oct 5th, 2007 at 2:47 pm

    It is so creative! I like that very much! I agree with netweight and JDELPHIN that it is also too small for plotter.

  6. 6 by Lufograf | Oct 5th, 2007 at 3:00 pm

    Thank you all for your comments !! It’s always nice to have feedback on your work. ;-) And for the moment I agree with all of you ! ^^ I’m a little bit overflowed these times and I could not spend time that I would have liked on this logo. But I was quite satisfied with the concept, because I think it’s easy to make many variations. So I was really impatient to send it !
    It is true that the gun seems to be the intruder in this little game ! ^^ I will try to work again on it.

  7. 7 by Laurent | Oct 5th, 2007 at 3:04 pm

    Nice !!! Go go go laFraise powaaa :-)
    Very creative and fun ! I like it !

  8. 8 by Japasa | Oct 5th, 2007 at 3:09 pm

    hehe. it would be very great and nice if spreadshirt would take this poster for the advertising and this poster would specifically make inspiration of customer and stimulate the customer’s inducement to buy. really! :)

  9. 9 by Leah | Oct 5th, 2007 at 3:56 pm

    I agree the poster at the bus stop is great! I would definitely stop and look at it if I was standing there. I would probably even go check out the website if it was on the poster :-) Overall, I really think it’s provocative to the viewer. There’s something about that collection of icons that really communicates creativity. For those reasons, it was just placed it in this weeks picks…congratulations!

  10. 10 by azzaoui | Oct 5th, 2007 at 6:12 pm

    wow I really like this concept

  11. 11 by Lufograf | Oct 5th, 2007 at 7:05 pm

    Thanks a lot for all these positive comments, it’s really encouraging !

  12. 12 by Joel | Oct 5th, 2007 at 8:47 pm

    Yeah this looks really good, what a pity that its probably too many details for a logo and for small usage. The ads look cool!

  13. 13 by FabrizioDAF | Oct 6th, 2007 at 12:03 am

    this is much similar one to UNILEVER logo…

  14. 14 by AlexanderWende | Oct 6th, 2007 at 8:46 pm

    looks very cool, I like the composition inside the shirt ;)

    but it is too much detail for a logo, as an ad it would be great!!

  15. 15 by ami | Oct 6th, 2007 at 10:22 pm

    yeah, I’m really a big fan of the concept and the idea - however, of course, it has some limits (ie in space and flexibility, one indicator is your preview image) - so I guess you would whether need to find some more “essential” parts to make it a real logo, or work out on the concept a little more. but great work already now and nice poster ads!

  16. 16 by ikou | Oct 7th, 2007 at 11:05 am

    good work. maybe the asterisk may replace the “big shape” (the heart shape) for a return to “own label” and the speech bubble is a little redundant there is 2 logo for the moment.

  17. 17 by marakas | Oct 7th, 2007 at 7:43 pm

    nice concept thanks 4 your comments :)

  18. 18 by graphmotion | Oct 7th, 2007 at 8:21 pm

    where is your label?

  19. 19 by kogumi | Oct 8th, 2007 at 11:37 am

    Hi, don’t you think that’s more an illustration work than an identity one. I love the poster

  20. 20 by Japasa | Oct 9th, 2007 at 2:59 pm

    congratulate that you are in shortlist:) I love this poster so much! this poster is really indispensable! Of course without weapon ;)

  21. 21 by dogbite | Oct 10th, 2007 at 6:33 pm

    I AGREE WITH SOME OF YOU THAT THE POSTER/AD IDEA IS GREAT BUT FOR A LOGO IT’S TOO MUCH DETAILED.

  22. 22 by Lufograf | Oct 10th, 2007 at 6:44 pm

    I’m agree for the details ! I’m working on it but please don’t bite me !! ;)

  23. 23 by ElChupaCabra | Oct 10th, 2007 at 6:50 pm

    Looking fency! reduce it to just four or five elements and you could come up with a great one!

  24. 24 by azup | Oct 11th, 2007 at 7:44 pm

    look like UNILEVER logo

  25. 25 by Japasa | Oct 11th, 2007 at 10:45 pm

    congratulate!!!!! :)

  26. 26 by xbeliebig | Oct 12th, 2007 at 7:03 pm

    useful for comparison: http://www.unilever.com/Images/Icons-and-visual-language_tcm13-95872.pdf (Wolff Olins/ Miles Newlyn ©2005)

  27. 27 by havoca | Oct 12th, 2007 at 9:06 pm

    it’s so creative and individual, I really like the different symbols. good job!

  28. 28 by azzaoui | Oct 12th, 2007 at 9:45 pm

    congrats you qualify

  29. 29 by Sugarcube | Oct 13th, 2007 at 12:01 pm

    It does look a lot like the unilever logo actually, but nice idea!

  30. 30 by kidkryptonite | Oct 14th, 2007 at 10:11 am

    If this doesn’t win - it should still at least be an honorary t-shirt because the level of detail is beautiful

  31. 31 by lex | Oct 15th, 2007 at 4:12 am

    5 stars logo ;)

  32. 32 by ulahts | Oct 16th, 2007 at 9:10 pm

    I like this, but not as a logo. How would that translate into small sizes is a real problem.
    And it doesen’t look like UNILEVER logo ;)

  33. 33 by tippitappi | Oct 18th, 2007 at 9:53 am

    I like this one best, but converting it into a small logo will be a problem… I think.

  34. 34 by i wish i become a heartbreaker | Oct 18th, 2007 at 10:31 am

    realy great idea and perfect for this plattform, it inspire me also.

  35. 35 by Lufograf | Oct 18th, 2007 at 1:45 pm

    Thanks everyone for your supports and advices ! I have made an update of this one which is better with regards to the icons. You can see it here : http://olp.spreadshirt.net/entries/2007/10/18/play-with-forms-2-update/#more-14235

    cheers !

  36. 36 by rose | Oct 24th, 2007 at 3:21 pm

    i really like this, i get it. everyone gets it. looks cute aswell. i’d buy it actually.

  37. 37 by kogumi | Nov 5th, 2007 at 1:30 pm

    this one should win

  38. 38 by @le | Nov 6th, 2007 at 1:13 pm

    Wow it’s great work! Wonderful!

  39. 39 by volker | Nov 6th, 2007 at 6:51 pm

    this doesnt work as a logo cause there are too many detals and you would have to print it very big.

  40. 40 by Fab | Nov 6th, 2007 at 11:19 pm

    Reduce this down to 3 or 4 elements and this would be something special.Love the AD

  41. 41 by xhaia | Nov 22nd, 2007 at 4:28 pm

    It may not have the same figures as the UNILEVER logo but it’s the same concept, and it does not have a problem when printed in a small scale, because i’ve seen it and it works. At least for unilever does. Do some research….

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