SuperNEW!

12 Responses to “SuperNEW!”

1. 1 by dogbite | Sep 28th, 2007 at 10:43 am

   I LIKE THE VERTICAL VERSION WITH BUBBLE POINTING TO THE LEFT MOST. I THINK YOU SHOULD WORK ON THIS USING THE SIGN ON THE RIGHT AND THE NAME AND THE CLAIM RIGHT-ALIGNED SO THAT THE ‘BUBBLE” POINTS TO THE CLAIM. THIS COULD BE ANOTHER FINALIST.

2. 2 by Jana Eggers | Sep 28th, 2007 at 2:35 pm

   There is definitely something here. It does say freedom, which is great. It is a bit busy though… lots going on. Could it be simplified?

3. 3 by simonline | Sep 28th, 2007 at 2:52 pm

   sure, simplified version here: http://olp.spreadshirt.net/entries/2007/09/27/spreadwings/

   hehe

4. 4 by MuamerDESIGN | Sep 28th, 2007 at 3:10 pm

   Simonline, you are funny :)))
   lol

5. 5 by adam | Sep 28th, 2007 at 4:11 pm

   Yeah the idea and presentation gets an a+ from me. Somehow like Jana said its just a little too busy, i’m seeing flying mutant bird thing, maybe its too many messages at once - shirts, spreading via wings, tag etc might be too much to communicate in one graphic, for starters i’d drop the tag but keep the flying shirt idea. I like your approach with the typography!!

   Good job

6. 6 by Pascalphilly | Sep 28th, 2007 at 4:21 pm

   This looks awesome, i like your style. But it does not fit to spreadshirt somehow. A poprock band or somthing would be a great match, but this needs to be reduced I think.
   As you said in your first line “The Spread & The Shirt & The Label & The Love & The Logo” That is just too much. In my time in university a prof of mine used to say, a logo should contain one message, so that the customer is able to see it really quick while only walking bye. Its like throwing three balls to someone, he will only be able to catch one, its the same with messages in a logo as I think.
   Reduce it and keep the cool style up!

7. 7 by MuamerDESIGN | Sep 28th, 2007 at 5:22 pm

   Hey, thank you all on your comments!
   So you wanted something different, and here it is : SuperNEW! :)))
   Hmm…maby I will work on this more…

   @ Jana - We will try to simplify but also you on YouTube says: “Feel free to go a little crazier, surprise us a little more” ?

   @ Adam - Thanx! - I wear glases to :)) but I see something else !

   @ Pascalphilly - Thank you for your kind words. Sorry but I must ask you - did you mean:
   ” logo should contain one message “……”reduced”…… like this one here :
   http://olp.spreadshirt.net/entries/2007/09/14/your-own-logo-update/

   :)))

   Hmm… ?

8. 8 by Pascalphilly | Sep 28th, 2007 at 5:54 pm

   Yeah dude, reduced like that. It looks awesome, but not too unique somehow. Its a tough thing to have something reduced but still working. A tricky job we got, huh?;)

9. 9 by Japasa | Sep 30th, 2007 at 12:52 pm

   I agree with Pascalphilly. But nevertheless I like that very much. Good luck to improve that!

10. 10 by klos | Sep 30th, 2007 at 12:59 pm

    Creative. But all basic ideas (which fit to spreadshirt the best) are so explored, and all new ideas are so far and far from designers brief… The last week will be interesting

11. 11 by soe | Oct 1st, 2007 at 8:36 am

    maybe to near to shirtcity?

12. 12 by marakas | Oct 1st, 2007 at 12:53 pm

    nice design ! as said before three ideas in only one design is difcult to realize but it’s creative .

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