Hello, I took all your remarks in considerations and I tried to tweak the logo.
I reduced the size of the pencil…and this in two different ways. I also played with the logo and created some variations.
Ah I forgot� I also changed the typo 
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Have a look on the variations below and let me know what you think about !
I like the design sans the wavy string hanging off the shirt. The pencil drawing the shirt seems like the more significant message in the design while the string is an allusion to a message that’s already been pretty well communicated by the pencil. Also, for me, visually the design felt more succinct w/o the string.
hmmm, I think I really start to like it - looks less like an icon now and more like a logo. and also i dig the font - very nice & huge improvement!! (btw. the string/taglabel idea is really nice, but it looks like sperm ;))
I’ve just noticed you also changed the font…this is a Libel Suit, isn’t it? Really nice…
Thx for feedback
hahahaha !
@ ami : I didn’t see that reference to sperm…mmmh maybe it’s my unconscious vision of the “spread”
@ Mootsie : yeah you right it’s the Libel Suit font